Hierarchy exercise
Sample critique- Checked against
- One clear focal point
- What is working
- The stack of green bars is the first thing the eye reaches, and the small grey lines clearly sit beneath it.
- The one fix that matters next
- Move the coral circle so its edge lines up with the left edge of the green bars. Right now it floats alone, and the eye has no reason to go there.
Sample only. Written for the picture above, not for a learner’s work.




